Those deep mysterious eyes
Depth of ocean
Darkness of dense forest
Plethora of long tales
I found floating inside
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night
The ardent pain
Carrying since long
Trying to conceal
Beside corner of mysterious eyes
Pouring down slowly
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night
Intense liveliness narrating long tales
A sheer vocal not required
To complete carrying since ages
Beauty of those magnificent eyes
Is reflection of her soul
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark
The calmness which prevails
Innocence thy hem in
Lifetime will be ever less
To feel composed details
Purity so profound inside
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night
The depth was so innate
Heart craves for more details
Wish moment retains
Dawn doesn’t ascend
As she turned to me
Our eyes met and engrossed
They took my breath away
Earth is now at standstill
We were quiet and still
I was smitten
Feelings were pure and sure
Desire to get lost
In depth was at hilt
In the deep silence of dark night
In those Deep Mysterious Eyes!!
N I WAS LOST IN ME...............
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35 comments:
Manisha...there is a beautiful rhythm to the words in your poem...not unlike the soft lapping of the waves upon that deep ocean...thank you for sharing this...coming from the heart...
for the first time I saw this side of ur's.. u seem tough from outside but u r an ice-cream from inside.. :D
loved ur words like anything .. infact felt them intensely..
keep coming wid stuffs like dis..
love u.. wonderful u.. :) :) <3 <3
Long awaited post is here finally! :) should i need to say anything? Its simply awesome... In the dark night... Sitting looking at those mysterious eyes... Excuse me? Do your eyes happen to be brown coincidently? ;)<3 <3 <3 Loved it.. :) ahh i wanted to post 1st comment here :( You were late in telling me :(
WOW , THIS poem is so touching .A song can be composed out of it ..so beautiful penned down the deep feeling within ..and those deep secrets came out so naturally ..such a narration amazing.
Keep writing :)
It was a nice read.
Tender, touching and pure. Beautiful Manisha.
Loved the imagery in these lines :)
Fantastic Read !!
Dear Raven...thxx soo much fr hublme n beautiful response. It means a lot to me n encourages me!
Monu my dear sonu...thanks soo much...<3
Janu- Thx dear:)
Sumit- HAhhaa...I hv deep black eyes...;)
No dear...it jst dat people saw it before...i informed u as soon as i posted u...first or second ur love reached me...<3 <3
Vivek cnt say much...soo much appreciation makes me nervous wether i will b writing such good stuff fr my dearos....love...:)
Tam thnkuu sweets....:)
Dear Jyoti...thanks soo much humbly honored...:)
It is like hearing a beautiful song!! The words
Beauty of those magnificent eyes
Is reflection of her soul
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark
will stay with me all day!! wonderful work Thank You
http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/09/photographing-faces-and-places-in-key.html
Lovely!!
Hello.
My first time visiting.
Very touching expressions.
Great word flow. I like the repetition of:"As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night"
Thanks for sharing.
Thief In The Night
I like the rhythm of your poem...there is a beat that can be form.
The theme? Obviously you are in love....
The poem touches the readers hearts at so many levels, it's a fantastic poem.
Awesome Poem..... this poem is as beautiful as your eyes....i really liked it.
Jimmy thanks dear...honored!!
Fher....naa dear i aint in love right now...bt its true i regard d feeling called love above anythin else....wish i fall in love soon...;)
Andy wen appreciation comes from someone who s already a master in d field...it really matters!
Thanks a lot andy!
Valli...thankuuuu sooo much sweety.....:)
Dear Sulekha....thanks fr d presence n appreciation...:)
Priya...ooo...now dats a compliment...i lke it..;)
feelings were pure and sure,desire to get lost...off!! as always gr8..and now m completely lost in u...hahaha
Lolz...thanks nikhil....:P
So beautiful,Mani :)
I read this post twice and I can feel the depth of emotions in your words .. Brilliant indeed!
Keep Writing My Dear :)
And Congratulations For Being Featured On Blogjunta :)
Much Love and care
Good poetry:-)
Simarn- Thanku soo much sweetheart...yea it ws surprise fr me...made ma day..
Love u too! Besos!
Nasnin dear thanks soo much!! Means a lot to me!
Beautiful,Very deep Mani...very deep.
Thanks for your nice singing song....
Manoj- Thanks soo much manoj....:)
Beautiful romantic lines......!!!!!<3<3<3
v nice poem
indeed a deep meang
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