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Manisha Bhatia is the author of book, When My Father Cried, a romantic fiction novel released on 4th September by Story Mirror at Oxford Bookstore :)
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DEEP MYSTERIOUS EYES






Those deep mysterious eyes
Depth of ocean
Darkness of dense forest
Plethora of long tales
I found floating inside
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night

The ardent pain
Carrying since long
Trying to conceal
Beside corner of mysterious eyes
Pouring down slowly
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night

Intense liveliness narrating long tales
A sheer vocal not required
To complete carrying since ages
Beauty of those magnificent eyes
Is reflection of her soul
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark

The calmness which prevails
Innocence thy hem in
Lifetime will be ever less
To feel composed details
Purity so profound inside
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night

The depth was so innate
Heart craves for more details
Wish moment retains
Dawn doesn’t ascend
As she turned to me
Our eyes met and engrossed
They took my breath away

Earth is now at standstill
We were quiet and still
I was smitten
Feelings were pure and sure
Desire to get lost
In depth was at hilt
In the deep silence of dark night
In those Deep Mysterious Eyes!!

N I WAS LOST IN ME...............


36 comments:

Ravenmyth said...

Manisha...there is a beautiful rhythm to the words in your poem...not unlike the soft lapping of the waves upon that deep ocean...thank you for sharing this...coming from the heart...

Monu Awalla said...

for the first time I saw this side of ur's.. u seem tough from outside but u r an ice-cream from inside.. :D
loved ur words like anything .. infact felt them intensely..
keep coming wid stuffs like dis..
love u.. wonderful u.. :) :) <3 <3

JANU said...

This is awesome!

SUMIT KUMAR said...

Long awaited post is here finally! :) should i need to say anything? Its simply awesome... In the dark night... Sitting looking at those mysterious eyes... Excuse me? Do your eyes happen to be brown coincidently? ;)<3 <3 <3 Loved it.. :) ahh i wanted to post 1st comment here :( You were late in telling me :(

Vivek said...

WOW , THIS poem is so touching .A song can be composed out of it ..so beautiful penned down the deep feeling within ..and those deep secrets came out so naturally ..such a narration amazing.

Keep writing :)

It was a nice read.

Tameka said...

Tender, touching and pure. Beautiful Manisha.

Jyoti Mishra said...

Loved the imagery in these lines :)
Fantastic Read !!

Mani said...

Dear Raven...thxx soo much fr hublme n beautiful response. It means a lot to me n encourages me!

Mani said...

Monu my dear sonu...thanks soo much...<3

Mani said...

Janu- Thx dear:)

Mani said...

Sumit- HAhhaa...I hv deep black eyes...;)
No dear...it jst dat people saw it before...i informed u as soon as i posted u...first or second ur love reached me...<3 <3

Mani said...

Vivek cnt say much...soo much appreciation makes me nervous wether i will b writing such good stuff fr my dearos....love...:)

Mani said...

Tam thnkuu sweets....:)

Mani said...

Dear Jyoti...thanks soo much humbly honored...:)

JP Brandano Photography said...

It is like hearing a beautiful song!! The words
Beauty of those magnificent eyes
Is reflection of her soul
As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark

will stay with me all day!! wonderful work Thank You

http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/09/photographing-faces-and-places-in-key.html

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Lovely!!

Andy said...

Hello.
My first time visiting.

Very touching expressions.
Great word flow. I like the repetition of:"As I sat to watch them
In the deep silence of dark night"

Thanks for sharing.

Thief In The Night

FherYmas said...

I like the rhythm of your poem...there is a beat that can be form.
The theme? Obviously you are in love....

sulekkha said...

The poem touches the readers hearts at so many levels, it's a fantastic poem.

Priya said...

Awesome Poem..... this poem is as beautiful as your eyes....i really liked it.

Mani said...

Jimmy thanks dear...honored!!

Mani said...

Fher....naa dear i aint in love right now...bt its true i regard d feeling called love above anythin else....wish i fall in love soon...;)

Mani said...

Andy wen appreciation comes from someone who s already a master in d field...it really matters!

Thanks a lot andy!

Mani said...

Valli...thankuuuu sooo much sweety.....:)

Mani said...

Dear Sulekha....thanks fr d presence n appreciation...:)

Mani said...

Priya...ooo...now dats a compliment...i lke it..;)

nikhil..walking all alone said...

feelings were pure and sure,desire to get lost...off!! as always gr8..and now m completely lost in u...hahaha

Mani said...

Lolz...thanks nikhil....:P

Simran said...

So beautiful,Mani :)
I read this post twice and I can feel the depth of emotions in your words .. Brilliant indeed!

Keep Writing My Dear :)
And Congratulations For Being Featured On Blogjunta :)

Much Love and care

Nasnin Nasser said...

Good poetry:-)

Mani said...

Simarn- Thanku soo much sweetheart...yea it ws surprise fr me...made ma day..

Love u too! Besos!

Mani said...

Nasnin dear thanks soo much!! Means a lot to me!

Manoj said...

Beautiful,Very deep Mani...very deep.
Thanks for your nice singing song....

Mani said...

Manoj- Thanks soo much manoj....:)

Blessy said...

Beautiful romantic lines......!!!!!<3<3<3

Anonymous said...

v nice poem
indeed a deep meang

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