Passion was brewing inside, but I never realized
You came in life and previewed my soul inside
I had lost my way and destiny found you for me today
With silent footsteps you sneaked in life and made all OK
Your embrace alleviated the pain
My heart and soul was carrying from prolonged time
The touch consoled my fears
Infused a sense of completeness inside
Caring and sharing became part of life
Emptiness fluttered away filling it with love from all sides
Two souls are now bound with eternal love
Heavenly showers and blessings poured in from all sides
Your graceful presence has illuminated my life
My soul was set free when you previewed it inside!!!
WHEN I WAS LOST IN ME...
@Copyright 2012- Manisha Bhatia
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26 comments:
Hello Mani,
Really very touchy and emotional poetry..and your words are coming from your soul..nice poem.
Best wishes.
Hemant
Dear Hemant,
Thx so much...u r right it ws straight frm soul... my emotions wer v high while i wrote it...m v thnkful f motivation...god bless u!!!
nice poetry..
Thanks suryaa....:)
God Bless U~~
Hi ravi..thx....:)
'It is my soul that calls up on my name'.
-----Romeo and Juliet
Ayub...i soo loved d line by romeo n juliet...thxx fr posting it...god bless u...:)
Hope u will like other creations...keep motvating!!
Beautiful Manisha,Iam sucker for romantic poems and this one is simply beautiful...Love bears all things,believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things, Love never ends.
Alps...thxx soo much...even i hv dat regard fr d most divine n beautiful feeling in ths world...:)
wonderful. the man behind the lenses of mesmerizing personification with his immense influence changes life and fills with love overflowing the brim. i believe in love, i believe in the power of love, i believe in the every lines of your poem.
Hey...thxx soo much sanchi....i loved each line f ur comment...beautiful....
wow nice poem very touching n like ur blog :)
Riya- Baby thanks a lot...u knw its my first poem...its v v close to my heart...first one i wrote!!!
Nice poem Mani,
Finding a soul that understand your soul deeply is more difficult in the era but you mentioned it very poetly that I feel every person souls for me.......
I mean every girls soul.....
:)
Feel like being 'filled by love from all sides'! Very nice, dear Mani!
-Portia
Very romantic Mani...your words fills me up with love.
What a beautiful poem. You previewed my soul. How romantic that is!
@Harshal- Nice u liked it...;)
@Posh- Thanks hon!
@Janu- Thanks...let love prevail...:)
@Rim- Aaha sweets thanks..:)
...ur poem just blew me away..
..it was awesome.. :)
@Rigs- Thanks rig...love Mani!
My sweet Mani,
Sometimes love arrives unexpectedly. Love is the kind of emotion we can't deny, for when it comes knocking...no matter how much we try to fight it...it always wins in the end.
Very nicely expressed. Keep on romancing us with your pen, my dear friend.
Thanks for sharing.
{This Moment} #3
Such sweet words by such a loving and endearing woman.
Beautiful...:)
http://jerlyt.blogspot.in/2010/02/valentine-for-loved-or-unloved.html
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