“Love”-As I utter the world or even try to compose a creation, at a slow pace I feel I am drowning in a deep ocean. It’s so vast and endless that sometimes I feel that no matter how many creations I write I will never be able to touch the core of the most precious and beautiful feeling in this world, which apart from being the most beautiful is the most painful feeling in the world. Love is eternal because all the other emotions are derived from the beautiful feeling called “LOVE”.
Here I present a saga of love of two lovers in midnight december...
Here I present a saga of love of two lovers in midnight december...
A night to remember
Of midnight December
Down below the rocks
Through steep valley lane
Concealed from this world
Two lovers meet
In the midst of
Dense and dark woods
Playing hide and seek
They are out
Of everyone’s sight
They get lost
To weave enduring
Exquisite saga
Of love tonight
The tinkling rhyme
Of high waterfalls
Is the mantra
Nature will play
For them tonight
The lush green
Pastures drape them
In eternal swathe
As their lips lock
They taste
The tenderness
Rhythm of love
Has start
Beneath the calm
Aura of starry night
Nature will espouse
The divine dawn
Swathe of endless
Cobalt clouds
Will disguise
From this world
While they feel
The sensation
In deep silence
They can hear
Shrill of their
High heartbeats
Passion soars
They discover
Several touches
They feel deep
Chaste emotions
As passion fumes
In this frozen
Enigmatic moonlight
With every move
Sensation zooms
Diffused intense
LOVE
They breathe
Warmth of love
Will burn
Their souls tonight
Their innocent heart
Has touched
Every untouched chord
Two lovers meet
Forever locked
In a night to remember
Of Midnight December!!
While the lovers meet, divine aura disguises them and shower blessings from all sides.
WHEN I WAS LOST IN ME...
@Copyright 2011-Manisha Bhatia
30 comments:
disguised thought of each n every heart..
In lonely alluring place,
that also at the tym of dark,
what wud b d best occassion than this.. i wonder..
Only one can wonder n get totally lost in the love party shared by the two...
loved it like love..
<3
Monu- Thanks soo much dearo....loved ur appreciation...
Love
Mani
I just loved this!
-Autumn Eliza
OMG!!!!! You have it in you...I am getting goosebumps reading this Manisha..its wonderful...love is what I feel for you, for you have my soul, heart and passion, those can only be felt again when I desire you.
That was awesome Mani....Lovely narration...
Oooh!! Loved reading about love. You landed me in the world of love through your lines. Awesome!! ♥
Hello.
What a night it will be!
Mani dear, I think you've read enough of my poetry to know I exist for & in the image of love.
Welcome aboard the love train where each dish contains a hint of passion, a dash of romance & an abundance of love (smile).
Lovely write.
Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Mani, that was an intense sensuous poetry to the computer screen afire!
So much love....lovely Mani. Too good.
Beautiful words!!!
@Ely- Thanku sweets..<3
Alpana- Thanku so much!
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MAni
Valli- Thanku sweets!
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MAni
Shreya- Smiling...:P thanku dear
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MAni
Andy- Yo andy u r so right...love is all we need...
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Mani
Rahul- Thanku dear!!
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MAni
Janu- Thanku dear!!
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MAni
@Farfalla- Thanks and most welcome.
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MAni
You know something girl?....you are simply mind blowing.How can I say bad,when it's so hot red.
Their innocent heart
Has touched
Every untouched chord
Two lovers meet
Forever locked
WOW :)
That was a beautiful read! Following you even more now : )
Kriti
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Abhi- Thanks much abhi....for all love n motivation...<3
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Mani
Kriti- Hey thanks so much..:)
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Mani
Oh totally sensual ;) I'd love to read this to my future husband lol :D
@Mely-Hahha...by all means sweets, me too in d same boat..:D
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Mani
I love this article and the photos!
Pascal- Thanku so much dear!!
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Mani
Love in December is about the only way to keep the lonely cold away. Good poem :)
Nova- Finally u r here..:D
Thanku so much.
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Mani
v nice
v v beautifully written & expressed love in v sweet & v loving way........
loved it
good work MANI DI........:)
Loved this poem, Mani. It is beautiful!
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