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Manisha Bhatia
Manisha Bhatia is the author of book, When My Father Cried, a romantic fiction novel released on 4th September by Story Mirror at Oxford Bookstore :)
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OUR FIRST EMBRACE~



When~
We embraced first time
I held you very tight
It was not the fear of losing you
To owe you forever
Or to lose you ever
Was never in my mind
Feelings were as chaste and clear
Just like the prayers
Of an innocent child

There was no pretence
No encumber of expectations
My heartbeats were very high
I was just very nervous
My eyes were very shy
To meet your eyes
I broke in your arms
So that my shyness
Can find place to hide

Took me long to deem
Now the moment has arrived
You are beside
Upheld my face
Tenderly in your palms
Your eyes read the emotions
I could no longer hide
Numb and coy
Quivered deep inside
I again held you very tight
When~
We embraced first time....

WHEN I WAS LOST IN ME...

@Copyrightg 2012- Manisha Bhatia

22 comments:

Sumit Chakraborty said...

You told me so give a critic comment...
:D
I am speechless...
Gorge-Awesome Creation Dearo! :D

shadowarchives said...

amazing poem :)
though there was a difference in complexity in different stanzas, second one was simpler than the other two, so it created a little of an imbalance. but on the whole, awesome :)

janaki nagaraj said...

This is really beautiful and very deep. Loved it.

Alka Gurha said...

Emotional, tender.....

Anurag M Chauhan said...

it's as awesome as alwaz...ur writings show the true meaning of love..:)

notesbymohit said...

nice poem mani :)
reminding of fresh, just blossoming love

sweepyjean said...

Beautiful, sweet, and honest. Lovely poem.

Leah Griffith said...

You're such a romantic my dear. This was lovely and raw, I could see him reaching for your face...

FherYmas said...

First time, always had that special corner in the memoir of our hearts...
How I wish...that first time stayed much longer.


Once again...a beautiful piece.

Andy David said...

My dear Mani,
I can tell you are a romantic at heart. You are also very talented. Good job with this poem. I hope you will never stop writing such beautiful words.

Mani said...

@sumit- Thanks dearo :)

Mani said...

@Terence- The critic review was quite appreciated and will be in future Thans!

Mani

Mani said...

@Janu- Thanks janu!

Mani said...

@Alka , Anurag, and Mohit- :) Dearos

Mani said...

@LEah- Aww! Thanks leah!

Mani

Mani said...

@Fher- Truly Fher thanks much~

Love
Mani

Mani said...

@andy- Thanks andy...u r indeed far ahead...Love Mani

Elvira Lobo(Elli) said...

OH SO ROMANTIC....HMMM:p

Jerly said...

u are a true blue romantic. Beautifully expressed as always. direct impact!

Anonymous said...

awesome.......
lovely poem.....
no words 4 such a nice poem
only i can say here
"hats of 2 u yr....."
ya dil manga more aha.....!!!!!!

Tameka said...

What a lovely moment Mani!

http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/04/lyric-fire-napowrimo-2012-day-six-of-30-poems-in-30-days-love-letter-to-haiku-a-haiku-about-haiku.html

Jyoti Mishra said...

that is so full of love..
we always remember the energy and freshness of initial days :)

Awesome read !!

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