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Manisha Bhatia is the author of book, When My Father Cried, a romantic fiction novel released on 4th September by Story Mirror at Oxford Bookstore :)
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THOSE EYES~


 

The sketch of beautiful eyes is by dear friend "VALLI" a truly talented creative soul, though I have written this poem few days back and couldn't find any natural pic reflecting the core of my creation till I came across Valli's sketch~ So I again edited the poem with her sketch as it truly compliments the creation.
To have a look at her brilliant work do visit and join her page- *When my pencil speaks* on Facebook!

Those eyes

Captivated me whole night

Where passion of

innocent love resides

Abode of paradise

Lighten up my essence

Captured my senses

Sleep is now...

A far story from my eyes

Since they are dwelling

your reflection inside

I will conceal you

from the world

treasure you forever

to be awake all my life

Your love

like shining star 

twinkles in my heart

Not ME anymore

I am now...

Blended in your soul

Dissolved in your core

Since I have been

living in the depth of

Those eyes

They became the reflection of my life...

@Copyright 2012- Manisha Bhatia

Lost in THOSE EEYS...

13 comments:

Simran said...

Mani dear..
this is so beautiful and cute :)

lines took my heart away~

''Sleep is now...
A far story from my eyes
Since they are dwelling
your reflection inside''

Love you...keep writing :-)

janaki nagaraj said...

Oh! I love those eyes..:-)

Dangerous Linda said...

Mani -- You are such a romantic! Blessings!! XO

Anonymous said...

so v lovely completely lost in innocent attempts eyes
while readng this
simple magic in ur eyes didi ji
force u to write such a beautiful lines
i m realy loved it........)

Alka Gurha said...

Beautiful verses....mushy indeed.

Andy David said...

Dear Mani,
The eyes...they sure do tell stories don't they? It's so easy to get lost in them too. This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Your visits make me happy too. Have a great week ahead my sweet friend.

In The Womb Of Sorrow

Sea Green Natural said...

Completely beautiful!

Andy David said...

Dear Mani,
Each week over at my blog, in honor of my first Blogoversary earlier this year, I randomly select the links of 4 followers to highlight on my blog as a Featured Follower! This week, you have been chosen. For more information & to claim your award (if you so choose), please click here..

Don't forget to join me this Saturday May 5th for Blog Hop Saturday! Linky opens 8:00am-8:00pm EST.

sHoNa said...
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sHoNa said...

beautiful & completely beautiful!

Regards,
shona


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Anonymous said...

beautiful ..................
eyes always speaks yaar....
akho ma tari aja sa abhi si adaya hai.......

Jerly said...

eyes are definitely the most captivating. Awesome topic

melissa said...

Oh there's so much to see Mani and it's wonderful that they also reflect you :)

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