The events fly by night
Moments to and fro
Accretion deep within
The incessant starts
Eyes wedged
On the destination
They follow
Mind’s intentions
Deep sigh
Dreams are high
Each passing night
Tossing and turnings
Pangs of frets
In the sheathe
Of mysterious smog
Dead silence of
Frosty dark nights
Aimlessly
I just ramble on
The hidden secrets
In my heart
Since ages
Are locked
Icy breeze
Diffuse deep
Within the soul
Sometimes
When pain exceeds
My limitations
I drive pleasure
In desolation
Lost and frost
Suddenly
I dash fast
Mind and heart
In a cross
Till I sweat
My heartbeats
Implored to stop
In the middle
Of slender
And slippery lane
On my knees
Wrapped in
Cover of solitary
I could hear
ECHOES
Of silent squeals
Scuffles from within
All around!!!
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33 comments:
You have woven a beautiful tapestry with your words,the pain and longing is visible..
Awesome Mani. Just beautiful.
This is really beautiful Mani. You do wonders weaving words to express yourself.
http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/02/powerless-you-fade-away-into-distant.html
the magic u create with words..
sweet n subtle feelings and an awesome imagery..
Loved it !!
@Alpana- Thanku dear.
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@Janu- Thanku so much rimly...:)
@Jyoti- Dear jyoti thanku so much...
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@Rimly- Thanku soo much sweets...love-Mani
Echoes making way to ur inside that even over came the breeze outside! You made me feel the heat in chill mani.. it was a dose of silent killer (in a good way) that evokes a mixed feelings of both excitement and fear.. u highlighted a thought to ponder on..pretty different dearo.. loved it..
lots of love <3
Monu- Thanks soo much , u felt the intensity f d creation completely...
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This is a beautiful poem Mani! Thank you for sharing this with us.
Nelieta- Thanku so much!
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amazing Mani!!
from one emotion to another,I was racing along..
vivid imagery and breath-taking pacy notes,and I must say you have a pretty impressive vocabulary!!
Hi Rohit,
Thanku so much...Appreciated!
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You have picked a nice topic: echoes. Lovely, nicely penned. :) xx
Echoes of silent squeals, the way you put words together is always amazing to me. Beautiful poem.
Shreya- Thanku dear.
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Jan- Thanks ya sweets.
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You never fail to amaze me with your words.To be honest I read it twice before commenting just to feel the depth there.Merry Christmas :)
When The Heart Speaks
Hello Mani.
I am here FINALLY...please excuse my lateness in visiting.
Like Abhisek, I read this twice. It's vivid & intense. I could see the tossing & turning of one fretting and feel the inner turmoil.
Once again penned straight from the heart.
Thanks for sharing & visiting. Always a pleasure to see you over at my blog.
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Abhi- ThanQ so much for all support n motivation. <3
Andy- Thanku soo much andy...pleasure is al mine..:)
very intense! really, inner struggle is so hard!
-Autumn Eliza
Manisha, Your poems make me wonder at your ability to express true and gut wrenching emotions. Brilliant poem,love it.
Sulekha thanku so much.
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I don't know what else to say... Your readers have said it all. I will be honest and say that I did read this a few times to understand its intensity and depth... Makes me pause and feel its sensation...
Thanku so much dear!!
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Hello my best wishes for these dates as indicated
and for the new year arrives that your wishes are met
Happy New Year 2012!.
A hug.
Thanks ricardo!!
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Lovely images created by your words!
Eerie Mani... but echoes are here to stay...
@Rahul- Thanku so much dear!
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@Mely- Yea mely...they r inside...
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