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Manisha Bhatia is the author of book, When My Father Cried, a romantic fiction novel released on 4th September by Story Mirror at Oxford Bookstore :)
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ECHOES~

The events fly by night
Moments to and fro
Accretion deep within
The incessant starts
Eyes wedged
On the destination
They follow
Mind’s intentions
Deep sigh
Dreams are high
Each passing night
Tossing and turnings
Pangs of frets
In the sheathe
Of mysterious smog
Dead silence of
Frosty dark nights
Aimlessly
I just ramble on
The hidden secrets
In my heart
Since ages
Are locked
Icy breeze
Diffuse deep
Within the soul
Sometimes
When pain exceeds
My limitations
I drive pleasure
In desolation
Lost and frost
Suddenly
I dash fast
Mind and heart
In a cross
Till I sweat
My heartbeats
Implored to stop
In the middle
Of slender
And slippery lane
On my knees
Wrapped in
Cover of solitary
I could hear
ECHOES
Of silent squeals
Scuffles from within
All around!!!


@COPYRIGHT 2011-MANISHA BHATIA

33 comments:

Alpana Jaiswal said...

You have woven a beautiful tapestry with your words,the pain and longing is visible..

JANU said...

Awesome Mani. Just beautiful.

Rimly said...

This is really beautiful Mani. You do wonders weaving words to express yourself.

http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/02/powerless-you-fade-away-into-distant.html

Jyoti Mishra said...

the magic u create with words..
sweet n subtle feelings and an awesome imagery..

Loved it !!

Mani said...

@Alpana- Thanku dear.

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Mani

Mani said...

@Janu- Thanku so much rimly...:)

Mani said...

@Jyoti- Dear jyoti thanku so much...

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Mani

Mani said...

@Rimly- Thanku soo much sweets...love-Mani

Monu Awalla said...

Echoes making way to ur inside that even over came the breeze outside! You made me feel the heat in chill mani.. it was a dose of silent killer (in a good way) that evokes a mixed feelings of both excitement and fear.. u highlighted a thought to ponder on..pretty different dearo.. loved it..
lots of love <3

Mani said...

Monu- Thanks soo much , u felt the intensity f d creation completely...

Love
Mani

Nelieta said...

This is a beautiful poem Mani! Thank you for sharing this with us.

Mani said...

Nelieta- Thanku so much!

Love
Mani

Rohit said...

amazing Mani!!
from one emotion to another,I was racing along..
vivid imagery and breath-taking pacy notes,and I must say you have a pretty impressive vocabulary!!

Mani said...

Hi Rohit,

Thanku so much...Appreciated!

Love
Mani

Shreya said...

You have picked a nice topic: echoes. Lovely, nicely penned. :) xx

Jan said...

Echoes of silent squeals, the way you put words together is always amazing to me. Beautiful poem.

Mani said...

Shreya- Thanku dear.

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Mani

Mani said...

Jan- Thanks ya sweets.

Love
Mani

Abhisek said...

You never fail to amaze me with your words.To be honest I read it twice before commenting just to feel the depth there.Merry Christmas :)

When The Heart Speaks

Andy said...

Hello Mani.
I am here FINALLY...please excuse my lateness in visiting.

Like Abhisek, I read this twice. It's vivid & intense. I could see the tossing & turning of one fretting and feel the inner turmoil.

Once again penned straight from the heart.
Thanks for sharing & visiting. Always a pleasure to see you over at my blog.

A Woman's Poverty

Mani said...

Abhi- ThanQ so much for all support n motivation. <3

Mani said...

Andy- Thanku soo much andy...pleasure is al mine..:)

Autumn Eliza said...

very intense! really, inner struggle is so hard!
-Autumn Eliza

sulekkha said...

Manisha, Your poems make me wonder at your ability to express true and gut wrenching emotions. Brilliant poem,love it.

Mani said...

Sulekha thanku so much.

Love
Mani

sparklemezen said...

I don't know what else to say... Your readers have said it all. I will be honest and say that I did read this a few times to understand its intensity and depth... Makes me pause and feel its sensation...

Mani said...

Thanku so much dear!!

Love
Mani

Ricardo Miñana said...

Hello my best wishes for these dates as indicated
and for the new year arrives that your wishes are met
Happy New Year 2012!.
A hug.

Mani said...

Thanks ricardo!!

Love
Mani

Rahul Bhatia said...

Lovely images created by your words!

melissa said...

Eerie Mani... but echoes are here to stay...

Mani said...

@Rahul- Thanku so much dear!

Love
Mani

Mani said...

@Mely- Yea mely...they r inside...

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