The sketch of beautiful eyes is by dear friend "VALLI" a truly talented creative soul, though I have written this poem few days back and couldn't find any natural pic reflecting the core of my creation till I came across Valli's sketch~ So I again edited the poem with her sketch as it truly compliments the creation.
To have a look at her brilliant work do visit and join her page- *When my pencil speaks* on Facebook!
Those eyes
Captivated me whole night
Where passion of
innocent love resides
Abode of paradise
Lighten up my essence
Captured my senses
Sleep is now...
A far story from my eyes
Since they are dwelling
your reflection inside
I will conceal you
from the world
treasure you forever
to be awake all my life
Your love
like shining star
twinkles in my heart
Not ME anymore
I am now...
Blended in your soul
Dissolved in your core
Since I have been
living in the depth of
Those eyes
They became the reflection of my life...
They became the reflection of my life...
@Copyright 2012- Manisha Bhatia
Lost in THOSE EEYS...
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13 comments:
Mani dear..
this is so beautiful and cute :)
lines took my heart away~
''Sleep is now...
A far story from my eyes
Since they are dwelling
your reflection inside''
Love you...keep writing :-)
Oh! I love those eyes..:-)
Mani -- You are such a romantic! Blessings!! XO
so v lovely completely lost in innocent attempts eyes
while readng this
simple magic in ur eyes didi ji
force u to write such a beautiful lines
i m realy loved it........)
Beautiful verses....mushy indeed.
Dear Mani,
The eyes...they sure do tell stories don't they? It's so easy to get lost in them too. This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Your visits make me happy too. Have a great week ahead my sweet friend.
In The Womb Of Sorrow
Completely beautiful!
Dear Mani,
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beautiful & completely beautiful!
Regards,
shona
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beautiful ..................
eyes always speaks yaar....
akho ma tari aja sa abhi si adaya hai.......
eyes are definitely the most captivating. Awesome topic
Oh there's so much to see Mani and it's wonderful that they also reflect you :)
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