Every chord your strings blew
My soul dances to the tune
My heartbeats sing
The chords of my heart
Your dreams touch
Twine of my heartbeats
Your love plays
Whisper of magical rhymes
Fuse in my ears
You pick the words leisurely
From my trembling lips
Your love tunes
Consistently they sing
When our distinct colours
Blend together eternally
Unique glow they discover
Love makes souls radiate
Diffused in me very deep
Every passing second
Your LOVE I breathe
The love that I cherish
The profound innocence
And graceful silence
The eternal purity
Swathes my essence
My soul is nourished!!!
WHEN I WAS LOST IN ME...
@Copyright 2011- Manisha Bhatia
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28 comments:
Amazingly beautiful love chords... <3
My soul has also got a nourishment after going through words.. Intense diffusion indeed...
lovely work Sweetheart and i get lost in ur creation <3
Love,
Monu
Passion... it can hurt so much sometimes, we can hardly stand it. Without passion, maybe we could all have some sort of peace in this life... but then, we'd be hollow. Without passion, we would be dead.Some say love makes you weak from vulnerability, I say love makes you strong from surviving the fires of passion.
I loved it Manisha...its beautiful.
mani, you are really good at such poems. Please keep writing them for girls like me!
-ELLE
We get lost in your poetry....fabulous.
got lost deeply in your poetry. musical notes lingering, a life is not without love chemistry.
brilliant!! Mani :)
Monu- Your comments are as deep as my creations. Thanku for all d love and support ..Love mani!! <3!
Alpana- You always leave such beautiful words alpana...thanku so much dear!
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Mani
Elle Thanku sweets..I will..:)
Janu- Thanku janu...:)
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Mani
Sanchi- Thanku sweets...
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MAni
Beautiful. Soulful :) xx
Just beautiful, I can feel your heart in all your words.
Shreya- Thanku so much!
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Mani
Jan- Thanku sweets...
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Mani
You have a beautiful art of playing with the words :)
So,It's all so beautiful and much deep feelings in your each write- ups!
Keep Smiling kudiye :)
Lovely interplay of words!
Dearest Mani, I am here at last. Thank you for being patient.
Love's notes are always the most mellifluous sound one can hear.
Your poem is filled with depth of emotion Mani. We are addicts of the same substance...LOVE.
Beautiful. Nice imagery too.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks also for your continual loyalty in stopping by my blog. I appreciate your visits immensely & always look forward to seeing you.
Have a great week ahead, my friend!
Flower Of India
Sim- They inherit depth coz I feel these emotions that deep....
U too keep smilin my shona...:-*
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Mani
Rahul- ThanQ rahul!!
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Mani
Andy- Yes indeed andy u r right my dear....thankQ soo much even I m thankful for all d love n support...
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Mani
"Love makes souls radiate" - your poem reflects so much harmony; you've captured well the connections between love and music - created a symphony ...
@SE - Thanks for dropping by dear and the love n appreciation u left.
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Mani
well well a mix of instrument + love that's fabulous ..ways to go
That was awesome and soulful poem Mani :)
Sheril- ThanQ so much!
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Mani
Valli- Thanku sweetheart!!
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Mani
Loved the ending line..
music and colors that i could draw from your composition :)
Afixxion Addixt
Alcina- ThanQ so much dear...
Love
Mani
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