Tinkling of pouring sprinkle
I tuned in the radio
It was calling your name
Slithered in memories
I boarded the love train
The serene zephyr
Plays gently and leisurely
With my curly mane
Hides blush of your love
On my smiling face
When my tender
And choked voice
Slowly uttered your name
The frames passing by
Slowly stealing me
From worldly fibs
Every passing second
My heartbeat intensifies
I blend in your love
A little deeper
Pearls descending
From heaven
On my face
Soaked my soul
With your love
I felt you in me
With my eyes closed
I only hear all around
Chimes from
The flute of love
Played from tinkling
Of pouring sprinkle
I am lost and besotted
Standstill on this ground
Your love is my prayers
This feeling is as pure as DIVINE!!!
WHEN I WAS LOST IN YOUR LOVE BOY!!!!
@Copyright 2011-Manisha Bhatia
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29 comments:
Beautiful and refreshing~
Very much beautiful...
Well Well Well....who is he??? :P
you can message me secretly his name on Facebook...I don't mind... :P :P :P
Love is divine,nothing compares to it...I have fallen in and out of love several times in my life..but I have been fortunate enough to experience true love.You have a great way with words Manisha...and it always touches me.
"When I first saw you, you took my breath away.
When you first talked to me, I couldn't think.
When you asked me out, I couldn't respond.
When you touched me, I got shivers all through my body.
And when we first kissed, I floated away in my dreams."
Your words are so delicious Mani :* I just love eating them whenever I come here to visit...they are so luscious and lovely to my ears. I particularly like the adjective you used for love here. It is DIVINE! Che bello!
very beautiful Mani! I could feel the romance of the mind through the words u weaved. Loved. Keep it up
@Sim- Thanku so much my lil wonder...poochis!!
@Anshul- Thanks dear...nothin like dat..:P
Alpana- Thanku so much dear...those lines are so beautiful. Thnks for sharing.
Love
Mani
@MEly- Aww thanku mely..u r a sweetheart...lotssa love...<3
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Mani
@Jerly- Thnku jerly..:)
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Mani
yes this feeling is as pure as divine, a romantic blizzard that touched me to soothe the unhealed part somewhere hidden in me thereby evoking the vibes of divine love straight at the already opened door of my heart…
emotions impeccably displayed..
Love <3
Monu
...words crafted beautifully..
..keep the words flowing...
..beautiful... :)
LOVE! LOVE! LOVE!
I JUST LOVED THIS POEM!
Monu- Thanks so much for al love n support..<3 <3
Rigs- Thanku soo much dear..Love-Mani
Ely- Thanku ely! Love-Mani <3
Hello Mani.
When you're on the Love Train, it will take you to the paradise of Xanadu where you can love & be lost in love forever (smile).
Beautiful, heartfelt poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Thanks also for your support & kindness throughout the year. I truly appreciate it.
Wishing you all the very best for 2012. May it be a year filled with much happiness, laughter & of course plenty of love!
Xanadu: This Lush, Tropical Garden
Andy- Andy thanku so much dear. I wish u d same and extremely thankful for all the love n support throughout.
i have been to Xanadu, it was fantastic.
God Bless!!
Love
Mani
Ahem ahem.. :P Beautiful.
Happy new year :) xx
Shreya- Thanks dear n wish u d same.
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Mani
A lovely poem to end the year...
May the romance continue.
It is absolutely DIVINE manisha and beautifully penned.. Happy New Year to you.. Let this year brings you the magic you wish..
Someone is Special
Fher- Thanks so much dear! AMEN!!
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Mani
Sarvana-Thnks sarvaan...how i wish d same.
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Mani
Lovely; beautiful as your words always are.
"Love is Divine" what a meaningful title....I had experienced a true love in my life.....Love is not only giving or taking something from other but its a just purely unexpecting feeling for your partner....without any intesion.....
Love you mani.....
Jan- Thanku so much sweetheart
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Mani
Harshal- Wish u n ur beloved besst wishes Harshal. Love u too...thanks for so much support n love.
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Mani
vv nice & true as well
no more words 4 such such a gud writng
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