Soul was at unrest
Nothing curtail my loneliness
Plenty came into sight
None strike the chord right
To make me thy anytime
Restlessness just escalated
Mask of fakeness concealed
Their truthful side
They lack the conviction
To intensify the heartbeats
They lack the trait
To win my heart
Instill the passion
Spread love and ecstasy
I now long since prolong
Do I need to wait some more time?
For love to materialize
Sing those love chimes
Strong arms to bind me tight
Life will be like a rhythm
Of waves flowing freely
Your gentle touch
Will make me shine
The two souls will merge in one
To bask in glory of love
Loose track of time
O boy!
I will be yours
N you will be mine!!!!
N I WILL BE LOST IN ME..........
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26 comments:
Wonderful again.
beautiful...u touched my heart....deep!!!
Thanks a lot janu!!!
Alpana thanks so much...m indeed glad it did touched ur heart...d writing ws worth it!!!
aha...so cute ''O boy, I will be rs and u'll be mine '' :)
..love those last 2 last...but dude!!! i think so need sm1..who arms can bind u tight..
:P
Niks...indeed now my guy should come... to bind me tght...;)
Simmi...thanks my love...:)
Hello.
I like the progression of this poem from the waiting for the right one to come along to the completely lost in each other at the end.
Nicely done, Mani! Great image too.
Thanks for sharing & visiting.
The Last Kiss
Plenty came into sight
None strike the chord right...
Damn good composition.I personally love poems when they rhyme a bit and this one..I just love it. :)
http://wehaveastory.blogspot.com/2011/10/think-about-it.html
Hi andy...glad and appreciated!
Hi abhi...
Thanks soo much...every creation has a bit f me ....congrates fr youth strings.
Mani
NICE!
_PORTIA
I loved the intimacy u pulled together in those words...
Lovely read !!!
Unrequited love expressed so with beauty and hope. Lovely!
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Words of love!!
Posh ur first comment on my post! Thanks soo much!
Tam from those long miles u understand my emotion ssoooo well honey! <3
Jyoti thanks soo much..ur love is soo much appreciated. Each time u r here..u inspire me for more!
Dear Vyankatesh thanks soo much!
Very vivid poem!
Short Poems- Thanks soo much..visited ur page...it was great to get in touch with u. Wish to connect more in future!
Mani, the flow of words were just awesome. Learnt from you about how to pour down the real feel through words.
O boy!
I will be yours
N you will be mine!!!!
N I WILL BE LOST IN ME..........
I dont have words to praise the beauty of this poem.
Dear Anshul...
Thanks so much...ur comment touched my heart!
We all will learn from each other indeed.
God Bless U!
Dear Manisha,
I am writing this letter to congratulate you on your upcoming book, when i was lost in me. Congrats dear, I am very happy. Wish you all the best for your future endeavors.
Love,
Sumit
Confused? Don't be. Because i am gonna write you the same latter when you publish. I am really expect you to! DEVINE WRITING! LOVED IT!!!
Sumit with ur best wishes I pray how I pray it turns into reality some day!!
Dear thanks so much for the heart wishes.
Lost of love
Mani
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