Was it the charm of little flirts we had around?
Was it the rhyme of beautiful devotion you played tonight?
My heart chiming and soul singing every day
I never realized HE is keen to compose one more magic today
Was it the fascination of candid chats that led to attraction?
Or laughter rounds was the key to fan the flames
The deciding moment creeped and fondness in heart grew stronger
I am always lost in deep thoughts as my day and nights have become same
Was the mystery held in the unspoken innate secrets?
We have imparted hidden deep in our souls
We were captivated as we shared with each other to console
The pearls flew down and I just couldn’t control
Was it the sweet memories of your mischief and tease?
Now I believe the secret lies in the deal to make me smile
Or was it in the magical ways to lit up my heart with so much ease?
When you are not around the corner, boy my knees go weak
Was it just a little attempt to fill the gaps of emptiness?
In the full moonlit night your deep look in my eyes
Left us hypnotized as the silence between us only spoke
We looked at each other as we both knew we were bowled over tonight
I believe the warm embrace became reason when you held me close n tight
As I was secured in your arms I knew you have won me over and I was right
The deep fears hounding my heart found place for sigh and I felt alright
May the dawn never approaches as our souls have felt the depth of love tonight
As the night grew darker and feelings more intensified
Our wet eyes made it evident now we both feel it in our hearts
My soul today is confident the unspoken love will last forever
It was the day of beautiful confession we knew it from start!!
N WE WERE LOST IN EACH OTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
42 comments:
Sweet!
My favorite line: 'Was it the sweet memories of your mischief and tease?' reminds me of my Sweetheart ;-)
Thank you!
Love is an amplification of desires..
u made my heart feel-- "awww.. how sweet"
i cud feel u r der in every bit.. though its a li'l bit..
fly high fly high fly high..
sweet is always,
a love sigh..
:) :)
Very beautiful words and blog too. Sweet feelings of love....:).
I have never been loved. But i enjoyed reading ur lines very much. :)
I love this one....a die hard romantic...this touched me deeply.
Love inspires many poetic lines. I enjoyed reading yours and also remembering my loves. Great pic as well.
http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2011/10/lyric-fire-look-at-my-fabulous-life-episode-8-.html
Linda- Ooo how sweet linda i reminded u f ur love...god bless u!!
Monu- Aww sweets i lovedur comment...<3 <3
Thanks janu!!
Mohiniji u r first time on my blog. M soo glad fr d presence n appreication..:)
Anshul- To be loved u need to fall in love n d day u will ...u will urself write romantic poetry...<3 <3
Alpana- Thanks fr ur presence n appreciation!!
Tam thanks soo much....ya me too loved this pic...:)
Hello.
When love is your heart & in your midst, even the dullest of days seem brighter.
Lovely expressions from you, Mani. Nice image too!
Thanks for sharing.
The Beauty Of Love
hhmmmm....that was lovely, full of romance....
well penned thoughts....:)
Oh,it is so sweet and flowing like a crystal-clear stream!I'd like to hug you,Mani!You are on a high,baby!
-PORTIA
A sweet, tragic and romantic poem which makes me want to fall in love all over again.
Different!!!!
Was it the fascination of candid chats that led to attraction?
its enough to lead towards a love story....
My soul today is confident the unspoken love will last forever
I liked most ur this line in ur creation.....hope u will like my attempt to write a story on similar subject "ek ankaha sa pyaar" at
http://csdevendrapagal.blogspot.com/2010/03/blog-post_15.html
while reading ur this creation "I LOST IN ME"....
Lovely love poem :)
expressions r beautiful.... I specially liked the last verse :)
Andy- Extremely thnkful fr ur presence.
Sulekha- Thanks soo much dear...:)
Valli- <3...thanks sweets u dunno bt ur blog ws y inspiration.
Dear Irfanji...m extremely honored to hv ur graceful presence on my blog. It means a lot wen appreciation comes from someone like u.:)
Devendra- Humbly honored...:).See u soon...:)
Jyoti- Thanks soo muh dearo..:)
Posh- Hugs bck to u baby!
fantabulous.......loved last 2 para..ahem hem love flowing thruout the poem..kise yaad kiya jaa rha hai mam?? :P
Love inspires the world. You have written beautifully.
Niks- Its celeberation of love...:)
Jan- Thx fr ur presence Jan...<3
love is felt from the heart, expressions always play deep inside the core where from it has got it's start.
lovely poem :)
Sanchi thanks soo much dear...:)
nice poem
love comes from heart and spread to universe
more we give more we receive
SM- Thanks a lot dear...:)
Such a poignant piece of writing!
cheers
Marinela
Hey...thanks soo much marinela...loads of love..:)
beautiful!the picture adds to the whole hypnotic effect:)
so happy to follow your blog.:)
Dear Haritha- Thanks soo much fr d appreciation n love. I will connect more wid u soon. Lots of love...:)
Sweet. Very sweet. And I am very happy to you lost in someone else too, and so deep indeed. :D
Is this poem for me? ;)
Awww Thank you so much :D JK
:D :D, this one is dedicated to all the ones who believe in the beauty of love my dear n u understand it best!
Love
Mani
Beautifully written :) I love your this post which woven with beauty of love, looks great. What a lovely poem..
Post a Comment