When in dawn
I open my eyes
Stretch my arms
Intoxication of love
Intoxication of love
Flows inside
Cuddle me back
In your embrace
Even if I fight
I play for
A little while
Hold me tight
Kiss me deep
Passion seal
Passion seal
Bask me again
In your love
Elude the moments
Blend as one
Dawn will be dusk
When our love
When our love
Will loose
Track of time!!!
WHEN I WAS LOST IN ME...
@Copyright 2012-Manisha Bhatia
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19 comments:
Intoxicating.
oh, truly romantic lines:)
elated by passion, my senses are too high. excellent patch of words on dancing floor Mani<3
Romantic, passionate words, Mani! :-)
How romantic, Mani :) <3
@All- Thanks so much sweethearts..Love u all:)
Mani
In such a state how will one keep track of time:) Lovely words, Mani:)
Such a beautiful creation dear :) Loved it :)
Lovely flow of words...How romantic....truly defines your feelings when you are lost in yourself...
I am intoxicated. :D
@Rahul- Thanks so much!
Mani
@Sumit- Thanks dear!
@Anshul- :)
Hello Mani.
I bet you thought I had forgotten about you? Been very busy, but you know I would come eventually (smile).
Love the rhythm & flow of this. We can try to resist love, but it always wins the fight in the end. Penned beautifully.
Thanks for sharing.
Please note, I've also changed my blog address. Make sure you update your bookmarks. Thanks.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Lovely poem.. I cannot say much because I am not good in analyzing poetry and feel so limited for words. Especially when I see very good creation
Short and sweet Hmmm ..your every post resembles love interesting Mani ..i think Mani is in love ???
sweet thoughts on love again Mani. :)
Je...
@All- Thanks so much buddies :)
Love
Mani
Nice one :)
Feeling that can only be felt , you pictured it beautifully.
p.s : how you doing? long time since I visited the blogging field. Happy Holi ..enjoy.
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